New Website

[SunnyOne]

Hello,

Please take a look at this site which allows one to confess their secrets and reveal their truths.
I am the co-founder of this site and would like some feedback on the concept and any other thoughts you may have. Feel free to sign up for the launch as the full site is not available, though a small portion of the site (Eclipse Moments) is currently in place.

Thank you!
[url="http://www.youreveal.com"]http://www.youreveal.com[/url]

 

[GnuDoyng]

I tried to read the Chinese translated main page and found its contents make little sense. Personally, I don't really think your site needs translating, because English is the international language and thus should be enough for most readers. If you do want to translate your site into another language, ask a native speaker for help, but don't use Google Translator, which always makes silly mistakes.

 

[David505]

Interesting concept, might work

I agree with the comment about the language translation

On the home page, maybe place the text beginning with “Do you have a secret?†above the “Guys scare me!†box

Good luck!

 

[Flint]

I agree with what David505 said about moving the "Do you have a secret?" headline above the "Guys scare me" box.

Also: That initial secret you display (Guys scare me) is critical. That's your hook. That's the most interesting thing on the page, and that's what best explains (through example) what your site is about. Consider making it much bigger (especially the font size of the secret itself). The secrets themselves should be the central focus of the site, not all of the surrounding explanations, which right now take up way more page real-estate.

One more: Pick a color besides dark tan for your headlines...they don't have enough contrast against the background.

Hoped that helped!