The Vision

[glad4mercy]

The Vision

I looked and saw Heavens door open in the sky
I saw the things that were to come, the evils that were nigh.
and when the door was opened, a mighty voice did say
"Man is man's destroyer. He paves destructions way."

I looked and saw upon a cloud a man in brilliant white.
A crown of hope was on His head, His eyes shone wisdom bright.
It was then the mighty voice did speak again to me.
and told me that this man was love, and love will set men free.

I looked and saw upon a cross, a lamb was being slain.
His eyes were filled with grieving tears, His body wracked with pain.
Once again I heard the voice, It is finished was His cry.
The doors of Heaven opened wide the moment that He died.

I looked and saw beside a tomb, a stone was rolled away.
An angel sat upon the stone, and this is what He said.
I know you seek the love you need, He is no longer here.
Go to the place He bid you come, and you will find Him there.

I looked and saw a mercy seat inside a Holy place
the Lamb of God was seated there, a smile was on His face.
A little child was with Him, reposing on his breast.
Come to me, he said to me, and I will give you rest
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[steph573]

I love your poem. The rhyming is on point. And I have no problem understanding the story. It talks about the Crucified Christ, his Resurrection and the cosmic drama that unfolded. That's very good. Keep it up.

 

[tessiewebb]

Here's a song i wrote today. I wish I knew music and notations. Can't give the rhythm in a post, though I have it in my head, but maybe from the words someone can. Would love to hear it if so, though I don't know how that could happen:

Oh, we’re free from the curse of Adam
And we’re free from the curse of the Law
Been given freewill from the Father
We can do anything at all.

The sons of God now live on earth
and are growing day by day
Into an army of righteous ones
who will carry out His will

Oh we’re free from the curse of Adam
And we’re free from the curse of the Law
Been given freewill from the Father
We can do anything at all.

All His people have the power to live eternally
Cause he’s freed us all from death and hell
and made Jesus Christ our peace!

Oh we’re free from the curse of Adam
And we’re free from the curse of the Law.
Been given freewill from the Father
We can do anything at all. (last line slowly)

 

[childeye]

And the Truth will set you free.