"Tim Limerick"

[Ambrose]

There once was a boy named Tim. His dad never taught him how to swim. He jumped off a dock and sunk like a rock and that was the end of him.

 

[God's_gift]

oh that is a sad ending:-( do you write stories?

 

[Ambrose]

Ah it was just a little mini comedy. I could try writing something a little longer and more touching

 

[Davies]

There once was a boy named Tim. His dad never taught him how to swim. He jumped off a dock and sunk like a rock and that was the end of him.

Hi Ambrose,

I have to admit, even though the limerick has a sad ending, I found myself chuckle. The reason why I admit this is because you labeled it as comedy. Maybe, it has to do with the rhyming. If you have an uplifting limericks, I'm sure they would be wonderful.

- Davies

 

[Ambrose]

Sure i guess i would work on something longer and more heart warming with the same feel of it.

 

[Jesusfreak97]

Cute...in a morbid way I guess lolz I liked it.

 

[tim-from-pa]

I thought it was hilarious! :toofunny