First poem :)

[August Noelle]

Hi Everyone,

I would like to share with you my poem about the wonderful mysteries of the world God so graciously created for us

please have a read and let me know if it is something you can relate to

http://authspot.com/poetry/the-unanswerable-question/

Thank-you,
Hayley

Ps. this is my first poem so i am abit nervous about it

 

[unclejed]

Hello August, not a shabby first attempt. I think you were "trying" a bit too much to make it "deep" and you got got a little obscure but over all it wasn't a bomb at all.

 

[Kyle]

Very nice poem August! It seems to me that you definitely have a talent when it comes to writing poetry. You put some powerful pieces of symbolism and imagery in that poem. :yes

 

[lionandthelamb]

i thought that was great

 

[Vans Slipons]

That was probably the goodest poem I have ever read in my entire life.

 

[dnphotographs]

very nice,
well worth the wait,
dont make this your last.