First poem :)

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Hi Everyone,

I would like to share with you my poem about the wonderful mysteries of the world God so graciously created for us :)

please have a read and let me know if it is something you can relate to

http://authspot.com/poetry/the-unanswerable-question/

Thank-you,
Hayley

Ps. this is my first poem so i am abit nervous about it :)
 
Hello August, not a shabby first attempt. I think you were "trying" a bit too much to make it "deep" and you got got a little obscure but over all it wasn't a bomb at all.
 
Very nice poem August! It seems to me that you definitely have a talent when it comes to writing poetry. You put some powerful pieces of symbolism and imagery in that poem. :yes
 
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