something I wrote a few months back

[evenifigoalone]

I don't attempt writing very often, and when I do it's usually short and rather simple.
But I wanted to share and get a little feedback on something I wrote a few months back:
http://colliequest.deviantart.com/art/Hope-293226174
(Please keep in mind that the specific account given in the piece is mostly fictional.)

 

[abide]

I don't attempt writing very often, and when I do it's usually short and rather simple.
But I wanted to share and get a little feedback on something I wrote a few months back:
http://colliequest.deviantart.com/art/Hope-293226174
(Please keep in mind that the specific account given in the piece is mostly fictional.)

I think it is beautiful. Thanks for sharing.