THE ABYSS

[tjboie2001]

THE ABYSS


Falling...tumbling...

Down..into the abyss...

Born as Satan's child

Innocents gone...

Tainted view of life

Injustice...

Leaving the fallen child

To drown...

Falling further now...

Grasping onto the wet rocky walls

Fingers bleeding...

Oh please save me

Please someone hear my cries...

This dull, numbing pain growing

Please...make it go away

Pools of fire drip off my arms

Please understand...

Listen to me...

I will tell you my darkness

Just listen...

Sounds echo...

...no one is there

No one to save me...

No one to hear

I want to let go...

...of the wet slippery wall...

...that I am holding on so hard...

...for nothing

I might as well let go

And let the darkness of death have me

The darkness wants me...

It is calling me...

...they say knowledge is power

I know where the darkness wil lead...

...but I don't care

Weakening to it's power

It's medicine for life...

Blood pooling off my arm...

...to just stay numb...for one more day

One more day that I can live...

...one more day to hold onto the wall...

It's pointless

I can't climb up on my own...

...but I am alone...

...terrified...

I want to just let go...

...and let the darkness of death have me

 

[Soma-Sight]

Thats pretty brutal man.

Well written however.

 

[tjboie2001]

Thank you for saying that's well written. Sorry if it is that brutal.

 

[Nocturnal_Principal_X]

tjboie2001 thank you for your poetry but please try and post them in the correct forum.

From now on try to post poems in "Poetry and Creative Writing" forum. Thank you.

 

[SyntaxVorlon]

Not bad, illustrative of the scene and the feelings and the despair.

(Innocence BTW)
Oh and if you look 'neath the message window, you'll find the spellcheck button. Good to use when you're composing something like this.

 

[tjboie2001]

Ok I will do that next time

 

[Soma-Sight]

Dont listen to these party poopers,

sometimes spellling takes second seat to just getting the existentialist demons out of your system.

I feel that same way these days man, trust me it only gets worse as you get older. hehehe. :-D

 

[tjboie2001]

Dont listen to these party poopers,

sometimes spellling takes second seat to just getting the existentialist demons out of your system.

I feel that same way these days man, trust me it only gets worse as you get older. hehehe. :-D

Gee Thanks :P I am not that old I just turned 26.