a poem i wrote

[Sondog]

Here's a little poem I wrote (the bold words are the beat):

Jesus is my Lord, He's the Great I AM
I turned over my life to Him and WHAM WHAM WHAM!
I could hardly be-lieve it.
De-cid-ed to re-ceive it.
He took my life from sa-tan, yeah, He beat the devil's scam.

I used to be a weasel, I used to be a jerk.
Wine, women, song and drugs
And not a lick of work.

I thought that He would boot me.
In-stead He roto-root me.
And pieced me back to-geth-er with His su-per glue of Love.

8-)

 

[Lovin]

SONDOG-WONDERFUL POEM!

I have to say that you done a great job on that poem. It kept my attention the whole time, very unusal and liked the style.

Lovin

 

[Sondog]

thanks, lovin -- i'm so glad you liked it! and the coolest thing about the poem is that it's true! Jesus really has delivered me from that stuff -- and lots more.

:D

 

[Lovin]

Sondog-You've Come A Long Way...

So the poem is actually true. That makes it that much more special, SonDog. I am proud of you, and the Lord has been good to you. You learned a new way to live. Your dancing to the tune of the Lord now, now wine, women and song. Bless your heart.

Lovin :smt035

 

[Cure of Ars]

:smt038

 

[BronzeStray]

It seems rather unoriginal and unmotivated to me.

 

[Lovin]

ABOUT THE POEM...

BRONZESTRAY...WHY DO YOU SAY THAT? REALLY, I AM INTERESTED IN WHY YOUR OPINION IS THAT ABOUT THE POEM?

LOVIN

 

[BronzeStray]

Re: ABOUT THE POEM...

BRONZESTRAY...WHY DO YOU SAY THAT? REALLY, I AM INTERESTED IN WHY YOUR OPINION IS THAT ABOUT THE POEM?

LOVIN

I meant no offense by that, but it just seems like something I've read a million times before.

 

[Lovin]

RE: POEM

NO PLEASE DON'T THINK THAT I THOUGHT YOU WERE BEING OFFENSIVE ABOUT THE POEM-I THOUGHT THAT MAYBE YOU SEEN A DIFFERNT VIEW OR OPINION (WHICH YOU ALREADY STATED YOU DID) ON IT. AND I DO LIKE TO HEAR WHAT OTHERS HAVE TO SAY. THAT IS ALL. BELIEVE ME, IN THE GAME OF LIFE, AS WE BOTH KNOW, EVERYONE'S OPINION HAS TO COUNT. WE DON'T STAND ALONE. :D

LOVIN