New Lyrics. I haven't written lyrics in long time so tell me what you think. Enjoy!

[Nicholas Cid]

I's means God. You = a person who is waiting for their true love from God. They
= people who do not wait on God to give them their true love and thus become unfaithful
towards their true love by cheating and marrying another person other than their true love.

I know the feeling, when your looking at the ceiling.
Your waiting for the one that I will send your way!

I know its getting harder, when your slipping farther.
Your just hoping today might be the day!

But there is something I think you should know!

They've abandoned you! Forsaken you!
They don't care for you like I Do!

They've failed you! Impaled you!
They don't love you like I do!

I know the reason, why this must feel like a treason.
You keep waiting for them to come your way!

I know the sense, why this must feel like a offense.
You keep hoping that they haven't gone away!

But there is something you should know!

They've abandoned you! Forsaken you!
They don't care for you like I do!

They've failed you! Impaled you!
They don't love you like I do!

I'll never abandon, nor forsake you!
I'll never fail you, nor impale you!
I care for you more than they do!
I love you more than they do!
I Love You More!!!

 

[Angel]

Re: New Lyrics. I haven't written lyrics in long time so tell me what you think. Enjo

My favorite is the last stanza. What do you mean by "nor impale you"?

 

[Nicholas Cid]

Re: New Lyrics. I haven't written lyrics in long time so tell me what you think. Enjo

My favorite is the last stanza. What do you mean by "nor impale you"?

I believe that God will not harm his followers, I mean this in a non-Trial kind of way, because I know God brings us through Trials.

 

[YosefHayim]

Re: New Lyrics. I haven't written lyrics in long time so tell me what you think. Enjo

It's pretty Good. It's kinda like how in Isaiah everyone keeps falling and failing and sinning. It's a cycle. And God's about to back-hand them for their tresspasses.

But He's full of understanding.

He offers them hope. He lifts up the faint, comforts the mourning, and heals the bruised through he who is Jesus Christ.



Isaiah 40 (27-31)
Why sayest thou, O Jacob, and speakest, O Israel,
My way is hid from the Lord, and my judgment is passed over from my God?
Hast thou not known?


hast thou not heard, that the everlasting God, the Lord, the Creator of the ends of the earth, fainteth not, neither is weary?



there is no searching of his understanding. He giveth power to the faint; and to them that have no might he increaseth strength. Even the youths shall faint and be weary, and the young men shall utterly fall:


But they that wait upon the Lord

shall renew their strength;

they shall mount up with wings as eagles;

they shall run, and not be weary;

and they shall walk, and not faint.

 

[Sparkey]

Re: New Lyrics. I haven't written lyrics in long time so tell me what you think. Enjo

Here's a pic that I downloaded so long ago I forget where from?


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. o O (Sometimes I think I've forgotten more than I've ever learned.)

Thank you for the song lyric. I likes.

 

[megansoon]

Re: New Lyrics. I haven't written lyrics in long time so tell me what you think. Enjo

Nice one.. Your great.