You want a 9-line post broken into paragraphs, but in half your posts you expect people to go read your blog?
What's a paragraph in an English narrative?
A paragraph is a group of closely related sentences that develop a central idea. Adjective: paragraphic.
A paragraph conventionally begins on a new line, which is sometimes indented.
The paragraph has been variously defined as a "subdivision in a longer written passage," a "group of sentences (or sometimes just one sentence) about a specific topic," and a "grammatical unit typically consisting of multiple sentences that together express a complete thought."
The paragraph has also been characterized as "a mark of punctuation." In his book A Dash of Style (2006), Noah Lukeman describes the paragraph break as "one of the most crucial marks in the punctuation world" (Paragraph Definition and Examples).
A paragraph conventionally begins on a new line, which is sometimes indented.
The paragraph has been variously defined as a "subdivision in a longer written passage," a "group of sentences (or sometimes just one sentence) about a specific topic," and a "grammatical unit typically consisting of multiple sentences that together express a complete thought."
The paragraph has also been characterized as "a mark of punctuation." In his book A Dash of Style (2006), Noah Lukeman describes the paragraph break as "one of the most crucial marks in the punctuation world" (Paragraph Definition and Examples).
My asking you to write in smaller paragraphs has zero to do with my providing links to my blog. If you read my blogs you'll find I write in smaller paragraphs and not give a 9-liner as you did.
This is how I would divide your 9 lines into other paragraphs:
If one alternative is "eternal life in God's kingdom," it scarcely seems to me to make any difference whether the other option is (A) annihilation, (B) eternal separation from God, (C) fiery torment, or (D) annihilation after fiery torment.
It's difficult for me to believe that if one alternative is eternal life in God's kingdom, any nonbeliever would say "Well, hey, if the 'only' consequence of remaining in unbelief is A or B, I'm OK with that!"
Worrying about the precise nature of Hell almost sounds like we think we have to "sell" eternal life in God's kingdom by pushing the most hideous vision of Hell. Granted, a literal reading of Scripture would indeed suggest a pretty hideous vision.
My point about Hell being something worthy of the perfectly holy, just and loving Creator is really aimed at Christians who are troubled by the notion of eternal fiery torment.
My point is not "The perfectly holy, just and loving Creator would never subject anyone to eternal fiery torment" but rather "Even if Hell turns out to be exactly as the Bible describes, we will ultimately see that this is worthy of the perfectly just, holy and loving Creator even if it strikes us as overly harsh now."
May you have a blessed day.
Oz