We believe that there is only one God, who is eternal and immutable, and manifests Himself in three distinct Persons; Father, Son, and Holy Spirit.
I happened upon the Statement of Faith thread and have copied a statement from the second and final post by Judy.
Admittedly, I am completely bewildered by the language. Most apparent is "who.... manifests HIMself in three distinct Persons...."
Much less grammatically incoherent, it simply doesn't make sense.
"Him" is a singular pronoun - it is NOT a plural pronoun. HIM (a single PERSON) manifesting as three PERSONS is well simply put a nonsensical statement. And, quite honestly begins to smack of Modalism.
What I am suggesting is a more articulate statement of the trinity. Perhaps something like -
"We believe in one divine being (vs. person) who, albeit a single essence, is tri-personal" Or, something along that line??
That at least makes sense at a basic communicative level (whether it is a valid article is a separate issue and not the subject of this thread).
The issue, albeit less troubling, is the statement, "...there is only one God..." when in fact trinitarian theology is noticeably more complex than this. Trinitarian theology - that which is being advocated - would seem better served by "...the one being of the Creator (= God) is composed on a single essence and three persons..." Thus on the level of essence, trinitarians are devout monotheists, whereas strictly on the level of persons, trinitarians are devout tri-theists (a form of polytheism); it simply depends on which aspect of the being of the Creator you are focused in any given context. One might say we are focused on the entire "being" of the Creator and therefore can maintain our devout monotheistic claim since indeed there is only one being - who just happens to have 3 personalities/persons/hypostases or whatever you will.
Anyway, please forgive me, but you can see how the common man finds "HIM" equalling "THEM" to cause a complete breakdown in reality. Perhaps a bit of re-writing to incorporate the more complex dynamic of the trinity along the lines of what I have suggested might help??
Sincerely,
In the man Christ Jesus,
Anth